17 Ocak 2013 Perşembe




JOURNAL SET 1 



Developing can be achieved thanks to education. The first step in education is learning to read and write. So reading and writing are the basic tools for  developing. Also it is every child’s right to learn these basic qualifies.  In addition , it is vital for children ,from different social groub to different intelligence, to learn reading and writing to achieve general – global  development in the world. Second, beginning with the birth human being needs to learn. It is like a basic need. But every child has different  intelligence. But it does not mean that those who have difficulty in learning how to read or write or something different don’t want or need to learn something. We are living in a developed world and everybody have to adapt it to be able to live. So we should help children who need help  to learn .Furthermore,without knowing how to read and write it would be very difficult to live. Today people are getting job according to their literacy.   So reading and writing are basic skills and every child must learn them. Also I think helping children who have difficulty in reading writing are important and everybody should see it as a duty.

1 yorum:

  1. Dear İbrahim,
    I really liked your journal and I enjoyed reading it very much. You selected an important problem which we face in today's world. Education and literacy. I found just one mistake: "The first step in education is learning to read and write." we can re-organise this sentence as "The first step in education is to learn to read and write." Your language use is good as well. I really appreciate you for writing this journal and I hope to read your other journals.
    With my best regards, Mesut.

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