JOURNAL SET 1
Developing can be achieved
thanks to education. The first step in education is learning to read and write. So reading and
writing are the basic tools for
developing. Also it is every child’s right to learn these basic qualifies.
In addition ,
it is vital for children ,from different social groub to different
intelligence, to learn reading and writing to achieve general – global development in the world. Second, beginning with the birth human being needs to learn. It is like a basic
need. But every child has different
intelligence. But it does not mean that those who have difficulty in
learning how to read or write or something different don’t want or need to learn
something. We
are living in a developed world and everybody have to adapt it to be able to
live. So we should help children who need help
to learn .Furthermore,without
knowing how to read and write it would be very difficult to live. Today people
are getting job according to their literacy. So reading and writing are basic skills and
every child must learn them. Also I think helping children who have difficulty
in reading writing are important and everybody should see it as a duty.
Dear İbrahim,
YanıtlaSilI really liked your journal and I enjoyed reading it very much. You selected an important problem which we face in today's world. Education and literacy. I found just one mistake: "The first step in education is learning to read and write." we can re-organise this sentence as "The first step in education is to learn to read and write." Your language use is good as well. I really appreciate you for writing this journal and I hope to read your other journals.
With my best regards, Mesut.